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Unpleasant memories
of footprints ingenuously left behind
in the sand, blown away by now.
I remember a new track in the snow
but it has melted away
- merely my own reflection lingers in the water.
A thought of a muddy trace in the mist
- another attempt to let myself stray -
yet by now the rain has cleared the way
Looking back
does any of it matter?
Time blurs all of it into actions of whim
Careful footsteps on liquid cement
a tough path
I hope, I won't be stuck.
But then you smile from afar
You know, I'm on my way
and behind me, the cement dries in the warm sun of spring...
of footprints ingenuously left behind
in the sand, blown away by now.
I remember a new track in the snow
but it has melted away
- merely my own reflection lingers in the water.
A thought of a muddy trace in the mist
- another attempt to let myself stray -
yet by now the rain has cleared the way
Looking back
does any of it matter?
Time blurs all of it into actions of whim
Careful footsteps on liquid cement
a tough path
I hope, I won't be stuck.
But then you smile from afar
You know, I'm on my way
and behind me, the cement dries in the warm sun of spring...
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Though I prefer the flow of the old version, it somehow needed to be updated.
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erm...if you prefer the old version, why not stick with it?